[quote="omnistry"]http://www.electricsistahood.com/reviews/2008/06/king-baby-ducks-j-volution-pillows-pied.html[/quote]
I'll just point a few things out here...
"The title track is quite the hip-shaker": Uhhh, the beat of Pied Piper's verses is one of the most undanceable things the pillows have recorded in recent memory. And really, "hip shaker?" Is that really an everyday term for you?
"'Last Holiday,' another track that would’ve fit with the band’s Big Four, just about matches up with 'One Life'": BLASPHEMY. It's good, but nowhere near One Life good.
"with 'One Life' as one of their most beautiful and lighter-in-the-air-inducing ballads.": I have no idea what you are trying to convey with the phrase "lighter-in-the-air-inducing".
"'Across the metropolis,' a B-side from the 'Tokyo Bambi' single is the only real misstep in this album; though the Beatles homage in the chorus is kind of nice.": This is your opinion, fine, but you may want to justify it somehow. Is it a misstep because they decided to include a b-side on the album? Is it a misstep because you didn't like the song? Is it a misstep because it screwed up the pacing of the album? Saying things like: "This was bad, but sort of nice I guess" doesn't convey much at all.
"'Purple Apple,' the album’s first English song, doesn’t make much sense; but its happy-go-lucky beat makes it quite the enjoyable track.": Nitpicking, incorrect semi-colon usage.
"'Tokyo Bambi'...is a poppy ditty.": Poppy ditty? Hip-shaker? How are your dentures holding up, omnistry?
"'That’s a wonderful song,' which is dedicated to their friends Hermit...": 1) Title, 2) Hermit is a guy.
"'Poison Rock’n’Roll,' the album’s other English track. It starts off soft, and then goes into a riff...": Uh, POISON ROCK'N'ROLL had no noticeable riffs to speak of...We listening to the same song?
Style wise, I'd just say that you're really clinging to a track-by-track rundown of the album, and that sort of hurts the review. Reviews are generally written for people who don't already own the album and want to know if its worth the money. Readers generally aren't asking: "So how was track 1? Ah, alright. So how was track 2? Ok. So how was track 3? Hm. So how was track 4? Oh really? So how was track 5? Sounds great. So...etc."
Consider taking a more broad approach - hit the highs and the lows (track-wise), but try to focus on the general sound of the album. The flow of it. How cohesive it is. What musical developments you can hear - has the guitar work changed? How are Sawao's vocals holding up? How does it stack up sound-wise to their most recent albums? You may want to mention any other characteristics, such as, oh I dunno...the extremely short running time of this album.
A short little summary of each track is pretty superficial. In the end, readers have taken away the fact that you enjoyed it, and that you think many of the songs are pretty good. What does that mean for them? Not much. Someone can tell me a song by Slayer has a killer chorus, tons of badass riffs and a solid beat...but until I get more detail or actually listen to the song, I won't know it's death metal. Which I pretty much loathe.
Also, I just want to mention this statement: "[Pied Piper (the album)] will also put smiles on the older fans that have been waiting for their classic sound to return. That wait has ended."
Really now? You'd consider Pied Piper to be a return to the pillows' "classic sound"?
Now before you hit that quote button to defend yourself, let's define a few things:
1) Let's not automatically tie "Classic sound" with "high quality stuff I/we really enjoy"
2) Just because we adore the holy trio (LB/RH/HB) and Please Mr. Lostman which we'd consider "classic" doesn't mean that any following album we adore is also "classic."
CLASSIC PILLOWS:
-More conservative use of distortion
-More open chords
-Less palm-muting
-Heavier distortion is rougher, less polished.
-Vocals sound more distant, less polished, and youthful (well, of course).
-Tracks with generally longer running times.
-Wider musical/sonic variety (Blues Drive Monster, Black Sheep, and Patricia were all on the same album)
-Vocals (and vocal melodies) along with lead guitar sound arguably more "tender" and nuanced.
"CURRENT" PILLOWS (from My Foot to Pied Piper):
-Sharp sounding distortion
-Palm-muting, more partial powerchords from Sawao
-Vocals are much cleaner, more "present"
-Less musical/sonic variety
-This is a much more subjective bullet, but it sounds to me like they're willing to take less risks. Songs, even the better ones that I love (No Surrender, YOUNGSTER, Ladybird Girl...) sound more "cranked out", less "carefully crafted while raw." Seriously, I mean listen to all the different stuff going on in BDM. Sawao almost has an echo, Manabe's riff has the perfect presence in the background, keeping a driving attitude without being overbearing. The guitar effect that comes in at 1:32. The increasing noise and wah that brings the song to a powerful, crumbling ending.
So that's why I think it's completely incorrect to say Pied Piper is a "return to their classic sound." Quite simply, it's not. It's an improvement on the more modern, cleaner pop rock sound they've been working on for the past few years. That's not a bad thing at all, don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining. But this really isn't the pillows shifting genres or shifting phases. This is just building on the sound they already have.
my two cents.
edit: Oh yeah and would you please stop sucking Japan's metaphorical dick all the time? Seriously, it's really irritating. I know you're mostly joking, but when you say "If it ain't made in Japan, it's usually crap!" it's just really ignorant and obnoxious. Being a fanboy is fine up to a point, but you just have to wrap your head around the fact that Japan and Japanese media have flaws. Just like other countries and their media. Sometimes you remind me of the immigrants that believed America's streets were paved with gold and you could easily get a well-paying job no matter who you were.