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Best song in a while, AGAIN.

ikiteru koto ni mou tsukarekitteshimatta
KIMI wa kokoro ga hagareochita ningyou
hi no hikari wo wasuresatta hitomi ni boku wa sukitootte

KIMI no sora wo itsu no ma ni ka ooikakushita
kyodai na kuroi tori to nandomo me ga atta
dokka ike yo arittake no koe de donaru kedo
kikime nai nda kuyashikute naita\

futari de nagai MAFURAA kurumatte
juunigatsu hagurenai you ni
aruita nda eien wo tameshitakute
BON'YARI mejirushi ni shiteta hoshi ni
kudaranai namae wo tsuketa
KIMI wa nanimokamo wasureta no ka

KIMI no shiroi TAMEiki to shiroi yokogao ni
ima no boku ga dekiru koto wa nan darou tte
kodomojimita ai furikazasu keredo
nanimo kawannai na mikansei no RABU SONGU

sore demo futari no hoshi wa kienai de
sasayaka ni yami wo kazatteru
kokoro no dokoda de sagashiteru yo
chirabatta KIMI no kakera wo hirotte
hitotsu zutsu hagarenai you ni
ki wo tsukete mou ichido dakishimetai

haru wa hoshi wo machiwabite
natsu wa tooku dekakeyou
aki wa sukoshi isogu kedo
fuyu wa zutto nemutte nemutte
me wo samasanai de iyou

futari de nagai MAFURAA kurumatte
juunigatsu hagurenai you ni
aruita nda eien wo tameshitakute
BON'YARI mejirushi ni shiteta hoshi ni
kudaranai namae wo tsuketa
KIMI wa nanimokamo wasureta no ka

ikiteru koto ni mou tsukarekitteshimatta
KIMI wa kokoro ga hagareochita ningyou
hi no hikari wo wasuresatta hitomi ni boku wa

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Totally fed up with living,
you are a doll that lost its heart
To those eyes that have forgotten the light of the sun, I am transparent

You met eyes many times with the giant black bird
that covered up your sky before you knew it
"Get out of here!" you cried out with all your heart
but it didn't change a thing. Frustrated, you cried

Wrapped up together in a long scarf
in December so that we wouldn't get lost
as we walked, wanting to test eternity
Absent-mindedly, we gave the star
we had been using as a sign a pointless name
Have you forgotten all of that?

What is it that I can do now? I asked
to your white sigh and the side of your white face
I showed you all my childish love,
but nothing changed. An incomplete love song

And yet our star is still there,
softly adorning the darkness
I'm searching for it somewhere in my heart
I'm picking up the scattered pieces of you
one by one so I won't lose them
I want to carefully hold you one more time

In Spring, I'm tired of waiting for that star
In Summer, let's go somewhere far away
In Fall, we're a little rushed,
but in Winter, let's stay asleep forever,
never opening our eyes

Wrapped up together in a long scarf
in December so that we wouldn't get lost
as we walked, wanting to test eternity
Absent-mindedly, we gave the star
we had been using as a sign a pointless name
Have you forgotten all of that?

Totally fed up with living,
you are a doll that lost its heart
To those eyes that have forgotten the light of the sun, I am...

EDIT: Changed a sentence to curb blank's incessant grammar-Nazi whining. :hmph:

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Subject-object agreement, yo'. ^_^

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Maybe I should also tell him that "in December so we wouldn't get lost" doesn't work as a phrase and that it would probably work better for have in December head off those stanzas.

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Maybe you should be smart enough to realize that those two lines are a classic example of enjambment. Suck me sideways.

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I prefer Blank verse.

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Amazing lyrics. They really match the melody.. Sawao's ability to write songs hasn't been damaged at all.

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It's been a long time since I felt this excited about a new song. Marvelous... Amazing...

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