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WHITE INCARNATION ~teh graduation gift~ 
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Post WHITE INCARNATION ~teh graduation gift~
In honor of graduation and all and me now having more spare time than ever before, I have begun translating white incarnation. This thread will be used for my posting said translations.

Currently reworking these, so far only Paper Moon ni koshikakete is done. (01/08/08)

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01 - colorful pumpkin fields

Colorful but cheap,
this step is just like tightrope dancing.
I just jumped from the top of the building,
but I have a feeling it's okay.

Jammed together and shaking,
standing in this kind of town.
"You are here," and that's all.
Everybody else is in the middle of some TV show
where it seems like anything goes.

Jump at full speed!
I came and stamped it.*
together with you in this pumpkin field forever.
I want to dance though looking at the stars.*

In a town where it seems as though
the balance will collapse if one screw is out of place,
"You are here," and with that alone
I don't feel as though there are any problems at all.
In this way, smiling!*

From now until forever, wherever I am;
even if the landscapse is like a deserted island,
I will follow the footprints that
I finally found where you were standing.

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the lines with asterisks next to them are ones that i can't figure out how to put/don't quite understand.

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02 - kanojo wa sister

I had a strange dream yesterday.
I was at the zoo with you.
With a proud look om my face, I grasped your hand
and led you along.

Like a child, your face*
looked so carefree.*

She is my little sister
like a little sister...

The distance between two people sure is strange.
Sometimes it seems close and sometimes it seems far.
Surely we can always be like this,
if we're close together, that's all.

There are days when I think it would
be nice if she could be mine, but

She is my little sister
like a little sister...

Someday somebody will come carrying a boquet
and knock on your door.

She is my little sister
like a little sister...
like a big sister
She is my little sister
like a little sister...

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* not quite sure if that's enough...technically speaking about her face from the side...but i think that's enough, don't you?

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03 - paper moon ni koshikakete (Sitting on a Paper Moon)

Make your final farewells to mom.
Look, when you're finished, get ready to go.
You pretended to be strong as you listened to those harsh words,
but Jack Benny's on the radio, are you still unable to sleep?

I rolled over at a sudden thought
and you, Addie, pretended to play
while chewing some gum.

At the amusement park,
you were sitting all alone
on the paper moon, weren't you?

In the bottom of the tobacco box is hidden
a photograph of mom and some held-back tears.

This nonsense of prideful me,
and skillful Addie feigning tears,
is the greatest deception in the world.

Saint Joseph who we kept waiting
came close and I became lonely

It was far too late for that promise
that fell through, but Addie,
I would never lie to you.

At the amusement park,
you were sitting all alone
on the paper moon, weren't you?

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Somebody set clips of the video this song was inspired by to the song:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=5cjSZMRWAdU
(props to [Mr. Lostman] for finding it)

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04 - kono mama koko de

There really was something that you wanted to say to me.
Won't you listen to even my explanation?
I understand. You and I tried to lay together, but*
we probably just passed by each other's shadows.*

You don't talk to me any more, you don't even show me a smile.
You don't even tell a joke. I am as myself, here.

There really was something that I wanted to say to you, but
(sou sasenai kabe no mukou ni iru kara)***

Already, it doesn't really matter. I won't even show my heart.
Everybody forgets. You are as yourself, there.

I told lies, trying to take your hand.
If it was for that purpose, any measure was alright.
You told lies with a nod when it was convenient.
With filthy faces, forever, we are laughing...

We are both in this way, here...

There really was something that you wanted to say to me.

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* as always, not quite sure how to phrase this...

*** ??? Since you're on the other side of a wall, you can't make me?

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05 - SARIBAN ni naritai

I was playing a tin drum
I remembered my childhood
No matter how much time passes, I can't change
I can never move from this place

Beneath the lights of Montparnasse
I can't even begin my journey
Above the scales of the other side
I won't try to show my preparations*

Hanging from unhearing ears, flattering my unturning head
I opened my eyes and repeated nonsense.

I still got hold you
I still need you.

Rocky Sullivan was a coward.
All the young boys were disappointed.
The only ones who know the truth
are him, the priest, and me.
That's right, just me.

Hanging from unhearing ears, flattering my unturning head
I opened my eyes and repeated nonsense.

I still got hold you
I still need you.

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I'm assuming it's "rocky sullivan"...confirm?

* not sure how to phrase (again)

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06 - ki ni shitenai yo

Just one more drink, fill it with warm black tea.
Right after that, I'll go home.
It's cold outside and you can't even see the stars.
I've no reason to, I'm not getting up.

Now that I think about it, you were always silent.
Just like always. Again, I laughed.

Because I'm becoming a little accustomed to even the things I hate
'Don't worry about it.' That's what I think.

What do I want? I understood perfectly,
but in any case, I'm not saying.
As I pass through, if I look out the window at the landscape,
somehow everything drifted along.

Now that you say it, I'm always shivering here;
Something is aiming for my soul.

Because even deceitful things, even things I avoid
'dotte koto nai yo.' That's what I think.*

That's what I think...That's what I think...
'Don't worry about it.'

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* dotte koto? i can't find it in my dictionaries...

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07 - blue march

I was across from the splendid march.
For the soldiers, today is a parade.
From the plastic models in my room,
a big tank; I wonder where they'll go to.

The turning pace from the wheels.
Following the order, the robot moves.
Even if it fires once or twice
there's no way to be that undaunted.

I don't even want to listen to an explanation.

(Blue March) End this tiny world.
(Blue March) I can't see any sort of line.
(Blue March) This worn-out planet's sigh
(Blue March) If you can hear it, look out! The Blue March.

I saw some scary news on TV.
Am I the only one with this nightmare?
I don't want to think about these terrible things, but
what do I do with this hole in the vacant sky?

The escape route is quickly shrinking.

(Blue March) End this tiny world.
(Blue March) I can't see any sort of line.
(Blue March) This worn-out planet's sigh
(Blue March) If you can hear it, look out! The Blue March.

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08 - yoake ga yattekita

I almost think it'd be fine even if time were to stop.
That was a dawn that couldn't be forgotten.
I didn't want to sleep. Alone on the roadside,
it enveloped me and I sat and basked in it.

The orange-colored sky and the painted clouds,
even the silhouettes of the reticent buildings;
they were all singing.

I use all the words that I know,
because I want you to be able to see it clearly in your head.

Like it was more than I deserved, like it was a little saddening,
like it could save me; it was that sort of color.

Today only, for my sake, dawn has arrived.
"Everything is going to be just fine;" that's how I was feeling.

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09 - tonight

Dreaming is very lonely;
waking up is scary.
Being with you is also somehow lonely.
I feel like going home.

Tonight
I wanna keep on smiling.

To sink into silence is very easy for me.
Soon, I won't find any words.
Even being alone is just a bit enjoyable;
not showing to anybody that I exist.

Tonight
I wanna keep on smiling.
Oh, yeah.

Tonight...

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10 - bokura no HAREE suisei

For now, let's just make a promise before.
Even with painful things, even with sorrowful tears, let's be together.
With childlike steps, however many times we stumble,
I will never let go of your hand; it'll be okay.

Together, we were watching the shooting stars. I only have one wish, that once more...

Let Halley's comet be in front of us again. Until the day it shows itself,
forever, and forever, I want to be with you.

If you also noticed, this innocent laughter right now could be forgotten.
Maybe I'll break, and I don't even know if I can sing.
The day will come when even this ever-turning planet will go to sleep.
Even so, it's no lie. You are indespensible, no matter what happens.

I wonder if I could go through a wizard to get
my request to this wonderful comet.

Let Halley's comet be in front of us again. Until the day it shows itself,
forever, and forever, I want to be with you.

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i know terra already translated this, but i interpreted it differently in a few places. this one surely has some mistakes; it was the hardest one on the whole album.

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11 - good night

Fun times feel so very short,
passing in the blink of an eye.
I won't say goodbye because again,
very soon, we'll meet right here.

Even the path home isn't scary. Surely,
it's a gentle wind that's blowing.
Tonight I can't escort you, but
you can't be late for the bus.
Good night...

We promised, and I marked the day that
we'll meet on my calendar.
You weren't the only one looking forward to it,
because I feel the same.

I'm not happy with just a letter, because
I got all dressed up and can't do anything.*
Fidgeting with my tie, I saw
how much I truly love to see you smiling.
Good night...

Good night...

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* i put "can't do anything" but "can't flirt/make fun" is the literal translation

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[quote="Marekenshin"]
and what the heck is MONPARUNASU? it's katakana...[/quote]

I would say either some odd way of saying Paris (usually モンパリ), or else [url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Montparnasse]Montparnasse[/url], a particular area within Paris.


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montparnasse has to be it (monparii = paris...)

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I do not own White Incarnation, (but I am saving up for it...) and the song in the Menu in "WE HAVE A THEME SONG" DVD. Is that "Kanojo Wa Shisuta"?

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