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Author: | Marekenshin [ Fri Jun 12, 2009 3:09 pm ] |
Post subject: | FLAG STAR |
Best song in a while, AGAIN. ikiteru koto ni mou tsukarekitteshimatta KIMI wa kokoro ga hagareochita ningyou hi no hikari wo wasuresatta hitomi ni boku wa sukitootte KIMI no sora wo itsu no ma ni ka ooikakushita kyodai na kuroi tori to nandomo me ga atta dokka ike yo arittake no koe de donaru kedo kikime nai nda kuyashikute naita\ futari de nagai MAFURAA kurumatte juunigatsu hagurenai you ni aruita nda eien wo tameshitakute BON'YARI mejirushi ni shiteta hoshi ni kudaranai namae wo tsuketa KIMI wa nanimokamo wasureta no ka KIMI no shiroi TAMEiki to shiroi yokogao ni ima no boku ga dekiru koto wa nan darou tte kodomojimita ai furikazasu keredo nanimo kawannai na mikansei no RABU SONGU sore demo futari no hoshi wa kienai de sasayaka ni yami wo kazatteru kokoro no dokoda de sagashiteru yo chirabatta KIMI no kakera wo hirotte hitotsu zutsu hagarenai you ni ki wo tsukete mou ichido dakishimetai haru wa hoshi wo machiwabite natsu wa tooku dekakeyou aki wa sukoshi isogu kedo fuyu wa zutto nemutte nemutte me wo samasanai de iyou futari de nagai MAFURAA kurumatte juunigatsu hagurenai you ni aruita nda eien wo tameshitakute BON'YARI mejirushi ni shiteta hoshi ni kudaranai namae wo tsuketa KIMI wa nanimokamo wasureta no ka ikiteru koto ni mou tsukarekitteshimatta KIMI wa kokoro ga hagareochita ningyou hi no hikari wo wasuresatta hitomi ni boku wa ================================= Totally fed up with living, you are a doll that lost its heart To those eyes that have forgotten the light of the sun, I am transparent You met eyes many times with the giant black bird that covered up your sky before you knew it "Get out of here!" you cried out with all your heart but it didn't change a thing. Frustrated, you cried Wrapped up together in a long scarf in December so that we wouldn't get lost as we walked, wanting to test eternity Absent-mindedly, we gave the star we had been using as a sign a pointless name Have you forgotten all of that? What is it that I can do now? I asked to your white sigh and the side of your white face I showed you all my childish love, but nothing changed. An incomplete love song And yet our star is still there, softly adorning the darkness I'm searching for it somewhere in my heart I'm picking up the scattered pieces of you one by one so I won't lose them I want to carefully hold you one more time In Spring, I'm tired of waiting for that star In Summer, let's go somewhere far away In Fall, we're a little rushed, but in Winter, let's stay asleep forever, never opening our eyes Wrapped up together in a long scarf in December so that we wouldn't get lost as we walked, wanting to test eternity Absent-mindedly, we gave the star we had been using as a sign a pointless name Have you forgotten all of that? Totally fed up with living, you are a doll that lost its heart To those eyes that have forgotten the light of the sun, I am... EDIT: Changed a sentence to curb blank's incessant grammar-Nazi whining. ![]() |
Author: | Blank [ Fri Jun 12, 2009 5:13 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: FLAG STAR |
Subject-object agreement, yo'. ![]() |
Author: | Blank [ Fri Jun 12, 2009 5:14 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: FLAG STAR |
Maybe I should also tell him that "in December so we wouldn't get lost" doesn't work as a phrase and that it would probably work better for have in December head off those stanzas. |
Author: | Marekenshin [ Fri Jun 12, 2009 5:32 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: FLAG STAR |
Maybe you should be smart enough to realize that those two lines are a classic example of enjambment. Suck me sideways. |
Author: | Blank [ Sat Jun 13, 2009 4:08 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: FLAG STAR |
I prefer Blank verse. |
Author: | AlucardX24 [ Sun Jun 14, 2009 2:05 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: FLAG STAR |
Amazing lyrics. They really match the melody.. Sawao's ability to write songs hasn't been damaged at all. |
Author: | kunde [ Sun Jun 14, 2009 9:33 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: FLAG STAR |
It's been a long time since I felt this excited about a new song. Marvelous... Amazing... |
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