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Author: | CARNVAL372 [ Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:50 am ] |
Post subject: | PANTOMAIMU |
Yes i'm finally done but this is my first time on posting lyrics. So correct my lyrics if their Wrong I don't mind. Song: PANTOMAIMU (Verse 1) Renga kuri no machi kadou bounyari ichibun katsu komo inona kaari Ukaunde Ieru no ka boku no futaisa kaisha ga einohitogakuri PASU wo mastumahisha ga miko no BAKUSUU no naka terekakushi hita ga kushi dachi agaru boku wa machi no yokina ieno iunna no namida hiroiyastu meru no sakoun yamo (Chorus) PANTOMAIMU enjiruyo nimu waratte yo mashiro na keshou shite onegette miseru yo kanashi ikoto wa imawa wa tsude boku no shigusao waratte okure (Verse 2) Kotomou ga hitori naiteru hisa okakaete naiteru naundei ema namida wo fuite waratte kurerudarou kanashi itoki wa itsudemo boku ouyounde kamawanai tsura ikou douni oushitsu busaretteru mawa jyaikenai de boku wa machi no yokina ieno iunna no kizu wo teateshite mawaru yokoun yamo (Repeat chorus) PANTOMAIMU enjiruyo nimu waratte yo mashiro na keshou shite onegette miseru yo ikoto wa imawa wa tsude boku no shigusao waratte okure (Verse 3) Boku wa machi no yokina ieno sa iunna no namida hiroiyatsu meru no sakoun yamo (Chorus Repeat 2 times) PANTOMAIMU enjiruyo nimu waratte yo mashiro na keshou shite onegette miseru yo PANTOMAIMU PANTOMAIMU PANTOMAIMU Kotoba nante iranai yo (Verse 4) Ouni sugari no nagare boushitto otsuki sa madake boku wo mitteta |
Author: | terra [ Mon Aug 15, 2005 8:31 pm ] |
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i would be happy to correct them but as a rule, i don't post or deal with lyrics transcribed by ear, only lyrics transcribed from the original kanji. it's hard enough to correctly catch things by ear in english songs, even when it's your native language. so it's somewhat futile until someone can produce scans of the lyrics. i know you tried, but you have a lot of things that aren't even words. just the first two lines (i know i'm not 100% right) should be something more like this: ren ga tzukuri no machikado bonyari nijimu ga sukou hiru no naka ni ukande mieru no ga boku no butai sa |
Author: | CARNVAL372 [ Tue Aug 16, 2005 1:03 am ] |
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I can't find the word "Tzukuri" |
Author: | terra [ Tue Aug 16, 2005 10:03 am ] |
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tzukuri (づくり) is an alternate/old spelling for 'tsukuri'. actually, i checked the dictionary again and it's one word, 'rengatzukuri', meaning brickwork. most systems romanize づ as 'du' or 'dzu', so you might have trouble finding it without knowing that. but as i said: [quote="terra"][b]i know i'm not 100% right[/b][/quote] no one here is going to be able to produce completely correct lyrics without the booklet. that's all there is to it. |
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