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Yes i'm finally done but this is my first time on posting lyrics. So correct my lyrics if their Wrong I don't mind.

Song: PANTOMAIMU

(Verse 1)

Renga kuri no machi kadou bounyari ichibun katsu komo
inona kaari Ukaunde Ieru no ka boku no futaisa
kaisha ga einohitogakuri PASU wo mastumahisha ga miko no
BAKUSUU no naka terekakushi hita ga kushi dachi agaru
boku wa machi no yokina ieno iunna no namida
hiroiyastu meru no sakoun yamo


(Chorus)

PANTOMAIMU enjiruyo nimu waratte yo mashiro na keshou shite onegette miseru yo
kanashi ikoto wa imawa wa tsude boku no shigusao waratte okure

(Verse 2)

Kotomou ga hitori naiteru hisa okakaete naiteru
naundei ema namida wo fuite waratte kurerudarou
kanashi itoki wa itsudemo boku ouyounde kamawanai
tsura ikou douni oushitsu busaretteru mawa jyaikenai de
boku wa machi no yokina ieno iunna no kizu wo
teateshite mawaru yokoun yamo

(Repeat chorus)


PANTOMAIMU enjiruyo nimu waratte yo mashiro na keshou shite onegette miseru yo
ikoto wa imawa wa tsude boku no shigusao waratte okure

(Verse 3)

Boku wa machi no yokina ieno sa iunna no namida
hiroiyatsu meru no sakoun yamo

(Chorus Repeat 2 times)

PANTOMAIMU enjiruyo nimu waratte yo mashiro na keshou shite onegette miseru yo

PANTOMAIMU
PANTOMAIMU
PANTOMAIMU
Kotoba nante iranai yo

(Verse 4)

Ouni sugari no nagare boushitto otsuki sa madake boku wo mitteta


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Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:50 am
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i would be happy to correct them but as a rule, i don't post or deal with lyrics transcribed by ear, only lyrics transcribed from the original kanji. it's hard enough to correctly catch things by ear in english songs, even when it's your native language. so it's somewhat futile until someone can produce scans of the lyrics.

i know you tried, but you have a lot of things that aren't even words. just the first two lines (i know i'm not 100% right) should be something more like this:

ren ga tzukuri no machikado bonyari nijimu ga sukou
hiru no naka ni ukande mieru no ga boku no butai sa

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I can't find the word "Tzukuri"


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tzukuri (づくり) is an alternate/old spelling for 'tsukuri'. actually, i checked the dictionary again and it's one word, 'rengatzukuri', meaning brickwork. most systems romanize づ as 'du' or 'dzu', so you might have trouble finding it without knowing that.

but as i said: [quote="terra"][b]i know i'm not 100% right[/b][/quote]

no one here is going to be able to produce completely correct lyrics without the booklet. that's all there is to it.

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