i have some corrections, mare. i trust you can fix your romaji based off this.
in stanza 1:
釈放, not 釈妨.
予約 not 子約
看守 not 看字重
stanza 4:
明日も. you left off the 'mo'.
surprise, surprise. this song makes no sense. so don't pretend this is accurate or anything, because i have no idea what he's talking about.
[quote="the pillows"]an innocent idea that won't be set free
i've got 21 fingers
i reserved the guillotine five times
that jailkeeper is a double spy
life is delicious
the convicted criminal
plays a seesaw battle with his sighs again today
the unacknowledged works of an idol
U, B, I need your hit point
a sign simpler than a whistle
you're not allowed to scream
life is delicious
tomorrow i'll play a daydream battle again
with my inferiority complex counterattack
life is delicious
today again the convicted criminal's seesaw sighs
inferiority complex counterattack daydream
forget about the finals and play the game of escape [/quote]